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Gill & Murry — 2nd Review Round, Cleaned Up

Client comments applied, proposal proofread, and a comment-caching mystery solved · 2026-07-11

Client comments applied, proposal proofread, and a comment-caching mystery solved

Master summary — the gist in 30 seconds

TL;DRBoth proposal pages are live, all 12 of Patrik's review comments are applied, the whole document was proofread top to bottom, and the 'comments won't go away' issue turned out to be a browser cache thing, not a real bug.

Input: 12 review comments left on the online ajánlat page, plus a request to proofread everything and clean up em dashes. Output: both review.cfd-staging.com pages updated and redeployed, comment thread cleared, zero typos or em dashes left.

Why this mattersThis is the document going to the client next — it needed to be both substantively correct (their pricing feedback applied) and typo-free before it goes out.
flowchart LR
  A["Patrik leaves<br/>12 comments"] --> B["Applied to<br/>ajánlat.html"]
  B --> C["Full proofread<br/>pass, both docs"]
  C --> D["Redeployed +<br/>comments cleared"]
  D --> E["Ready to send"]

1 · The maintenance-terms rewrite

TL;DRSection 07 went from a vague 'jótállás' (warranty) paragraph to a clear two-tier maintenance plan, per Patrik's clarification.

Input: Patrik's comment describing two options in plain English (no monthly fee vs. 22,000 Ft/hó) plus a follow-up clarifying the 12-month free period and penalty should stay. Output: a rewritten section — 12 months free technical warranty, then choose 'rendelkezésre állás' (no fee, 7-day fix) or the paid plan (3-day fix, some changes free), with a 50,000 Ft/day penalty either way if we're late.

Why it mattersThis is the section that decides what Gill & Murry actually pays after year one — worth getting exactly right and confirming with you before publishing, since it touches money and legal terms.
flowchart TD
  A["Year 1: free<br/>technical warranty"] --> B{"Pick a plan"}
  B -->|"No monthly fee"| C["7-day fix<br/>18k Ft/h for new work"]
  B -->|"22k Ft/mo"| D["3-day fix<br/>small changes free"]
  C --> E["Late? 50k Ft/day penalty"]
  D --> E

2 · Full proofread + em-dash cleanup

TL;DREvery sentence in both pages got checked — 5 more typos fixed beyond the comment-driven edits, zero em dashes left anywhere.

Input: 'check all documents for typos, remove em dashes'. Output: ajánlat.html had 5 leftover typos from the original draft (things like 'automaticusan' → 'automatikusan') fixed; the technical-annex page (melléklet) was checked line by line and came back clean.

Why it mattersA client-facing proposal with visible typos undercuts trust — worth a careful pass before this goes to Patrik and Zsolt.

3 · Where the proposal text actually lives now

TL;DRNotion is out of the picture — the two live HTML pages are now the single source of truth.

Input: earlier this week, a Notion page had briefly become the 'master copy' that other files mirrored. Output: you said plainly you only care about the deployed HTML — so that detour is closed, and future edits go straight into the live pages.

Why it mattersOne source of truth avoids the exact confusion that happened today — editing the wrong copy and having to double back.

4 · The 'comments won't disappear' mystery

TL;DRComments you clear on the server can still show up in a browser that saw them before — that's a caching quirk, not a bug in the deletion.

Input: you reported comments were still visible after I deleted them. Output: confirmed the server and two fresh browsers show zero comments — the leftover ones were cached locally in whichever browser had loaded the page before. An incognito window or a cache-clear on that machine fixes it instantly.

Why it mattersGood to know for every future review round on this same comment tool — don't be alarmed if a comment reappears in an old browser tab after you thought it was deleted.

⏭️ Next steps

TL;DRNothing is blocking — both pages are ready to send.

The proposal (review.cfd-staging.com/gm-ajanlat/) and technical annex (review.cfd-staging.com/gm-melleklet/) are live, clean, and comment-thread-cleared. If you see stray comments again in your own browser, an incognito window will confirm it's just local cache.

Why it mattersYou can forward these links to Patrik/Zsolt right now.

💡 Fun facts & practical stuff

TL;DRA few things worth knowing for next time.

• The comment tool mirrors every comment into each visitor's own browser storage — deleting on the server doesn't touch other people's browsers, which is exactly what caused today's 'ghost comment' confusion. • "AAM" in the price line isn't a typo — it's 'alanyi adómentes' (VAT-exempt), a real Hungarian tax status. • The coupon code 'JEGYZO15' is missing its accent on purpose — real coupon/discount codes are usually kept ASCII-only so they work cleanly in every form field. • Hungarian grammar detail fixed today: 'az' before a vowel-sounding word (üdvözlő), 'a' before a consonant-sounding one (7-es, read 'hetes') — small thing, but it's the kind of polish that shows in a client-facing doc.

Why it mattersMostly trivia, but the comment-caching one is worth remembering for the next review round.
Ajánlat (live) →Műszaki melléklet (live) →Full CHANGELOG entry →